The First Visit
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This is a short story based on the urban legend 'The girl on the road'. This is a completely original short story that I have wrote in my writing class. I'm putting this up so I can get some honest feedback on my writing skills. Please keep in mind that I am only in 8th grade, so I'm still learning! Please comment what you think. Thank you!
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