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A modern caste system that consists of individuals bearing a certain number of tally marks on their skin. Revealed from the day of their birth, the number of tally marks one has will decide the fate their life would lead to. The greater the number of tally marks , the better the chances of living a quality life.

Enter the story of a 1, positioned against one end of a spectrum, and the story of a 100, standing proudly against the other end. And you'd find out that these two aren't that much different, after all. 

[A writing prompt straight out of reddit's r/writingprompts.]All Rights Reserved

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An Inch Of Infinity (Short Version) by IAmAnAuthorLETMEIN

In the near future the entire world is conquered by a group of people known as Royalties, or the Royals for short. They declared war on the planet. If you were not with them, you were against them. by the end of the 21st century the world was utter chaos and anyone who did not follow the laws to the letter were taken away by the Keepers. Part ninja, part spy, part soldier, the Keepers were brainwashed citizens raised from 8 months old to be able to apprehend anyone. Only 87% made it through training. The population was cut into 6 groups, one for each block, each the size of a continent. Every other healthy child was marked at birth to become a Keeper. Children were often sent to other blocks to keep the population exactly even, but not always. Rebellions rose but were extinguished quickly, before they even really started. Eventually the only hope was a single underground rebellion until even that began to disappear. This is the same exact story as An Inch of Infinity except it has been broken into small chapters to be more easily read on mobile devices. I own the characters, the story, the cover art. Everything. Please don't steal them.

Of Illnesses And Antidotes by TheNextBigWriter1609

On their 5th birthday, they're dying. By their 18th birthday, they're dead. In a place known only as the Sanctuary, children of an inferior race known as Ebonies are forced into being test subjects. But they have no idea what they are doing. Their lives are no longer their own, their freedom and rights non-existent in a world where they are believed to be the cause of a fatal virus. For that, they must pay by being drugged, abused, ill-treated and experimented on in order to combat the disease they started and cure the Ivories they unleashed it on. Naomi is an Ebony. But she is also an Ivory. Her curiosity and intelligence have led her to the truth. And she knows she must escape. But how can she escape when she is already dead?

Rose to clarity by faithcastan

A land called Sataria is no place for freedom or peace, but a split land filled with dishonesty. It has been erupted by a cold hearted king that promises his people for a better future just to be growing hatred and fear among each other. Refusing unity by the misleading king the people have drifted a rift between them 'the norms' and 'the marks'. The Marks are misjudged people who were born with a supernatural ability. They try living in the dark shadows hiding there marks and themselves , but to be shun by a mistrustful concocted lie. By the kings hatred toward them they are abused and used by the king himself and his people 'the norms'. Rose has lost both her parents, and found out she was a mark all by the age of 13. Her aunt and uncle take her in just to find out she has a rare marking no like any other with more than one ability. With time of training and hiding she was happy by the love of her family until it all goes downhill. She experiences lost, friendship, love, betrayal and realization all to end up losing or finding herself and killing or saving the people she loves. 'The Clarity' is a group of marks who want to change the world. They are willing to do anything possible to save there kind and stop the king and the mistreatment by 'the norms'. They are fighting in the shadows waiting for there missing piece of the puzzle, so they can complete there destiny.

Fragility Of Existence by PikBom

This is just a novel. In a world where chaos reigns, Creation waits for a Creator to give it purpose, but when a cosmic surge disrupts reality, dark forces begin to unravel the very fabric of existence. As unsettling events unfold and cryptic messages emerge from the depths of the System, the inhabitants of this world find themselves confronting hidden truths and betrayals that threaten their lives. With time running out, they must unravel the mysteries lurking in the shadows before everything they know is consumed by darkness. Disclaimer: This novel is a work of fiction, and any references to real-world figures, events, or institutions are purely fictionalized for artistic purposes. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or real events is coincidental, and the depictions herein should not be construed as reflective of their real actions, beliefs, or character.

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The Five Unnecessaries by LauraCampbell560

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Link City by MapleCFreter

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The Five Unnecessaries cover

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An Inch Of Infinity (Short Version)

In the near future the entire world is conquered by a group of people known as Royalties, or the Royals for short. They declared war on the planet. If you were not with them, you were against them. by the end of the 21st century the world was utter chaos and anyone who did not follow the laws to the letter were taken away by the Keepers. Part ninja, part spy, part soldier, the Keepers were brainwashed citizens raised from 8 months old to be able to apprehend anyone. Only 87% made it through training. The population was cut into 6 groups, one for each block, each the size of a continent. Every other healthy child was marked at birth to become a Keeper. Children were often sent to other blocks to keep the population exactly even, but not always. Rebellions rose but were extinguished quickly, before they even really started. Eventually the only hope was a single underground rebellion until even that began to disappear. This is the same exact story as An Inch of Infinity except it has been broken into small chapters to be more easily read on mobile devices. I own the characters, the story, the cover art. Everything. Please don't steal them.