My True Savior

My True Savior

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Take everything you know about the world and Christianity, flip it upside down. You are a servant who keeps repeating life. Odd thing is, you always remember your past lives. Where will this lead you? ------------------------------ Authors Note "I have a dream" or had one anyway. It interested me enough for me to remember and want to write about it. Sadly i woke up before the ending so that will be interesting to look into. Anyways, I hope this interests others and that this is an original enough idea. This is my first true story and I hope it turns out good and that I can finish this story. Please comment any suggestions or thoughts. I want to make this is good as I can. 12/30/18 - started writing
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Memories

Before you read the summary, I want you to know that this isn't a story about paranormal beings falling in love, with each other or ordinary people. It is about the horrifying and unusual consequences caused be love. "How?" You may wonder...well I guess you'll just have to read and find out. "There was still something there that rang so familiar inside of him, in a place he had long forgotten about. But as a word hangs from one's lips at precise time it's needed or a person is overcome with an overwhelming sense of déjà vu, he just couldn't figure out where he had seen her before. Before this city. Before the last city. Before the city before that. Maybe even before Hell itself." A man's unusual beginning leaves him empty and without a memory. All he knows is that he doesn't belong here, but there is literally no way in Hell he would ever go back to where he came from. Will he choose to be who he once was? Or risk never regaining any of his memories ever again? I was also wondering if you could give me some feedback on the story! It's my first full story I've ever written and I was wondering what's working, what isn't making sense. If you could help me out I'd be really grateful!

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