A Beautiful Mess
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  • Parts 42
  • Time 2h 28m
Complete, First published Jul 23, 2012
"I had never thought in a million years that a boy who used to hate me, who used to make me cry, who used to play tricks on me could possibly make me fall in love with him.."

Saydie was only four when Ethan started playing tricks on her: purposely spilling his chocolate drink on her white dress, giving her a slimy lizard at the first day of school, blew her sand castle off and much more..  She was brave, yet she felt that this boy had done enough.  When she turned 16, she hadn't expected that a boy like Ethan could hide something from her..

A/N: I wrote this when I was 16 and didn't have the chance to run through it and correct any grammatical mistakes. So if you found any, my bad.




A Beautiful Mess
Copyright © August 2012
thatVanillaGurl

Teen Fiction #670
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