Battle Against the Elders

Battle Against the Elders

BoomerSooner627

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Parts 4

Ongoing16m

Last published Mon, Feb 25, 2019

action battle fantasy

Just a novel that I was thinking of writing. The idea originally came from something me and my friends were thinking of. I'll take criticism!

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