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Comatose

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Parts 5
Time 11m

Reads 77
Votes 3
Parts 5
Time 11m

David was the quiet one, almost as if he didn't exist in the first place. He was frail, and fearful of those who never noticed him.  With all his genius he couldn't muster up the confidence to speak to another person.   This was his last chance as the senior year slowly came to a close.  He always believed this would  be his life, a nervous wreck and in constant worry. 

Putting forth effort it crumbled his confidence moreover, yet his luck turned around when a new kid, Abel, gives him the faith he needed to come out of his shell.

Little by little, his new seemingly perfect friend began to pressure him to do what he thought made them like him, and made him cool. Soon his actions mirror that of a troubled youth, as his grades suffered, and his ego inflated. 

On a dare, he stupidly did what any kids his age would do to be accepted by his peers. Missing a step, falling to the ground, he got his final wish for popularity.  As for his fame, it was overshadowed by catastrophe, as he was hospitalized for his injuries.

 His cascade of rebellious behavior plummets him into a realm of a mind bending dreamscape.  Lost in the waters of his unconsciousness, as the sea of stars and planets envelope him, he must relive all the illusions of his own incolence.  As his mind wanders throughout the Universe, he learns through memory his life is nothing but a reflection of the celestial, and his consequences are the ghostly projection of his own accord. 

Will he find his way back to his loved ones?

Will he learn the truth of acceptance brought on by his isolation?

Does he wake, or will he forever remain Comatose?All Rights Reserved

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