Finding My Inner Child
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My first story, im not great at this but i thought id give it a go, please if you guys can critic me (not too harshly) that would be great, i don't know if i should continue.
This book is about Hope Remly and Micheal Jackson, Hope is a lawyer who gets sick and goes to a hospice/recovery center where she meets the king of pop, they become friends, maybe more but im not really sure where this book is going like i said first time writing.
Grammar and spelling might be a bit out but other than that please tell me what you think
Thankx
Harriet
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