Finding My Inner Child

Finding My Inner Child

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My first story, im not great at this but i thought id give it a go, please if you guys can critic me (not too harshly) that would be great, i don't know if i should continue. This book is about Hope Remly and Micheal Jackson, Hope is a lawyer who gets sick and goes to a hospice/recovery center where she meets the king of pop, they become friends, maybe more but im not really sure where this book is going like i said first time writing. Grammar and spelling might be a bit out but other than that please tell me what you think Thankx Harriet
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This is actually 2 books. (Both completed!) (I want to apologize for any spelling mistakes. I have edited, but there may be some) I ALSO HAVE A RETELLING. I PERSONALLY LIKE THE RETELLING, BC I ADDED A LOT MORE FATHER/DAUGHTER MOMENTS WITH FREDDIE & MEL, AS WELL AS I JUST ADDED A LOT MORE TO THE STORY. FEEL FREE TO CHECK IT OUT. Freddie Mercurys Melody (Years 1982-1992) What if Freddie and Mary had a child together? In the beginning of there relationship, a few years before the start of Queen, Mary finds out she's expecting to Fred's delight. Now with a small daughter & Mary's support of his dreams, he becomes the lead for the band smile. Changing the bands name to Queen and adding the bass player John to the group, they become a close family, and Queen sky rockets. Everything seems perfect until Fred and Mary separate do to Fred revaluation. Now In 1983, 16 year old Melody finally gets to spend real time with her father. She sees her 'uncles' & fathers legendary lives first hand. Seeing Roger again for the first time in years, she can't help but feel off around him. Could he feel the same about Fred's daughter? *I started writing this story January of 2019.* In his defense. (Book 2 in the series) (1992-2007) The world lost an icon, but Melody lost her father. In the second installment of this book series everything is turned up side down with the passing of Freddie. John, Brian & Roger try and help Melody, keep the promises they all made to Fred & defend a man that can no longer defend himself. After the tribute show for Freddie on his 49th birthday, Brian & Roger are itching to tour again- How can they do that without the flamboyant lead singer? Roger starts his own band, & things get complicated.. FREDDIE MERCURYS MELODY (REDONE) *Out now* STARTING IN THE 70'S. FRED IS IN THE RETELLING A LOT MORE THAN THIS ONE. SURPRISES ARE ALSO IN THE NEW STORY. I'M REMAKING BOTH BOOKS & ADDING ANOTHER TO THE LINE UP. *YOU CAN FIND THE RETELLING OUT NOW* -Bri

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