No Man's Land

No Man's Land

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Complete Thu, Jun 5, 201427m

I bet you probably think this is about war and blah, blah, blah, but its not, its about a girl and how she finds her true destiny. This girls name is Achyls Braedan Trueheart. She is a girl with a dream, but for centuries she has not been able to pursue it. She was held back by one thing, or person, her master, Petros Thanos Zinovia, a cruel and evil man with one goal in life. To become immortal, I know what your thinking, probably something that goes along the lines of “No one can become immortal! How can he?” Well my friend here is how, there is a greater and most powerful rock that if you break it open at the correct time, place, and setting, it will open and let you drink of its special wine, athánatos, meaning immortal. That is what will make you live forever. That is what the gods say anyways. So her master decided to try and failed every time, well that’s what everyone thought at least, but he really had achieved something greater than immortality. A power from the god's and with that ability he cursed all of the people who had not believed in him. So will he survive and destroy them or will love come in the way? Will there be a man who comes and steals away his precious Achyls and is his name Cerin?

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