Krillpin

Many years ago, before the first humans came into being, there was a species of animals with unique abilities, controlling the air, sea and land. But as more normal animals came into being and threatened the existence of these creatures, the magical animals sought refuge in locations hidden from humans. Seasons later, The Hippocampi Tribes are nearing war, and it will take one special hippocampus to bring the balance once more, with the help of an unlikely ally.

[Author's Note: This is a draft of a fiction book I'm thinking of writing, but this is part of a portfolio to get into a college I like! Please give me any criticism and if enough of you like it, I might continue with a full dictionary for the Hippocampus Language.]