Eclipse Narume: Queen of Spades, Dreamworld Makasa
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Last published Wed, Jul 25, 2012
This story is for my own personal amusement and boredom.
This story is a continued story from a rolepay I started a few years ago with a couple of friends. Each character in the story represent a person from my real life. For example; Eclipse is me, and her sister, Michi, who will be introduced later on in the story, is my very close best friend.
This story really has story line, at least as far as I’m concerned. I am just writing this for pure amusement because I figured it was time to put some story behind my characters and use them a little more.
Anyways, this part of the story is when Eclipse wakes up in a strange place. yes almost like alice in wonderland, but it's not. she discovers she is next to be queen, and tries her hardest to please everyone, and try to find a way home
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