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Outland **Rewrite**

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Leituras 1,249
Votos 7
Capítulos 5
Tempo 21m

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The first part of my upcoming project, currently without a cover, since I'm rubbish at making them. (Hint Hint: if any of you know a person I could probably commission to make me a compelling cover I'd be eternally grateful)

**so after taking a break from Wattpad (and the writing scene in general, nothing personal, peeps) I've come to the conclusion that Outland, the chosen name for this project needs to be rewritten from the ground up.

Chapters 1 and 2 are, for the most part, good. But after a while of drafting and thinking and putting off the continuation of my beloved FiXT inspired storyline I realised I couldn't see an endgame goal for this book...

Until today.
Today marks the start of the Outland Rewrite and I'd like to personally thank Red and Varis (idk your usernames off by heart so I can't tag you anyways, you know who you are though) for their help and criticisms during the initial plotline. Your input was greatly appreciated and taught me much, especially on the grammatical side of things, I'd also like to thank my girlfriend Mya, who has supported my work and bombarded me with a manner of questions I never thought I'd have to get round to answering. **

Sorry about the length of the description.

Tl;dr the old plot was sh*t and now I need a new one.Todos os Direitos Reservados

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