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When you're living in a place so strict and precise, you forget the feeling of love. The feeling of butterflies in your stomach, the feeling of saying dumb things on accident, and the feeling of never wanting to leave that person. Oh, wait, did I say that you forget the feeling of love? Our government makes sure you remember what it feels to love, and they don't make it so pleasant. So please, do me the favor as you join me, Otto Ryan, and somewhat of Nike Porter as we figure out the cause and effect of this...
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Years ago there was a blackout. One day all the lights went out. The cars stopped running. Electricity no longer existed. Nothing that ran on electricity works anymore. People panicked and tried to survive for as long as they could. Some made it out of cities the others stayed. Our government fell and militias took control. The Monroe militia took over. Then one day he found electricity again. He used it for bad and soon conquered the whole world. Years later our world now runs on electricity again. The Monroe militia is still in power and they force teens to go into an academy to train as merciless killers. This is where I go. One question I always have in mind is, In a world where hope is the only thing we have, Can love exist in the middle of all this war?

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