Work in progress - Gramander prompt

This is a snip bit of what I have done so far of a little mini fic type thing actually based off a really old grammander prompt by @silverynight on tumblr. I'm posting this here in hopes of getting feedback, so don't be afraid to give constrictive criticism! This takes place almost a year after the events of the first movie. MACUSA went searching for the real Percival and were luckily find him alive. After some healing with a little help from a certain Magzoologist, Graves goes back to his job as Head of Magical Law Enforcement at MACUSA. And of course, during the whole "healing" Percy falls in love with Newt. Shortly after Graves gets back to work, they find Credence alive. Seeing how well Newt helped Percival through his own healing process, they decided to leave Credence in Newt's care. Credence is now living with Newt and helps in the case, and has a sort of "mummy" relationship with Newt. Anyway, with long plot explanations aside, I hope you like this little thing despite my terrible writing skills.