The life is like a Shinny Steel (English version)

This story is originally written in Spanish, but I think that people who are not Spanish speaking should also be able to know it, and give their opinion about it; so I gave myself the task of translating it so that they can read it, I will try to make it as understandable as possible because some expressions can not be translated, without more than saying, enjoy :)

I want to clarify that as I do not speak English as a native, so if you see any error of translation please let me know