How I Would've Rewritten Twilight
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Last published Sun, Jun 16, 2019
If there's one book that is almost universally hated by modern readers, it's the Twilight Saga. Hailed as unholy for its creepy romance, boring main character, and dumb love interests, nearly everyone on the Internet has built a hate train and jumped right on it, screaming the name of Stephanie Meyer. Whether the book deserves the hate it gets is up to you, but here's the way I would rewrite it.
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╰┈➤ *⋆ "𝐢 𝐠𝐮𝐞𝐬𝐬 𝐢'𝐦 𝐬𝐭𝐮𝐜𝐤 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫... 𝐛𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐠𝐥𝐮𝐞. 𝐨𝐡, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐲𝐨𝐮!" ~ ᵇᵉᵃᵇᵃᵈᵒᵒᵇᵉᵉ ⁽ᵍˡᵘᵉ ˢᵒⁿᵍ⁾ 𝑀𝑦𝑙𝑎 𝐷𝑎𝑛𝑖𝑒𝑙𝑠 𝑛𝑒𝑣𝑒𝑟 𝑒𝑥𝑝𝑒𝑐𝑡𝑒𝑑 ℎ𝑒𝑟 𝑠𝑒𝑛𝑖𝑜𝑟 𝑦𝑒𝑎𝑟 𝑡𝑜 𝑒𝑛𝑑 𝑤𝑖𝑡ℎ 𝑣𝑎𝑚𝑝𝑖𝑟𝑒𝑠, 𝑤𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑤𝑜𝑙𝑣𝑒𝑠, 𝑜𝑟 𝑎 𝑏𝑜𝑦. 𝐵𝑢𝑡 𝑤ℎ𝑒𝑛 ℎ𝑒𝑟 𝑏𝑒𝑠𝑡 𝑓𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑡𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑠 𝑢𝑛𝑟𝑎𝑣𝑒𝑙𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑠𝑒𝑐𝑟𝑒𝑡𝑠 𝑠𝑢𝑟𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑑𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝐿𝑎 𝑃𝑢𝑠ℎ 𝑏𝑒𝑔𝑖𝑛 𝑡𝑜 𝑠𝑢𝑟𝑓𝑎𝑐𝑒, 𝑠ℎ𝑒 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑𝑠 ℎ𝑒𝑟𝑠𝑒𝑙𝑓 𝑐𝑎𝑢𝑔ℎ𝑡 𝑏𝑒𝑡𝑤𝑒𝑒𝑛 𝑚𝑜𝑛𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑠, 𝑓𝑖𝑟𝑠𝑡 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒, 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑎 𝑓𝑢𝑡𝑢𝑟𝑒 𝑠ℎ𝑒 𝑛𝑒𝑣𝑒𝑟 𝑠𝑎𝑤 𝑐𝑜𝑚𝑖𝑛𝑔. *NEW MOON* #𝐹𝑖𝑟𝑠𝑡𝑇𝑖𝑚𝑒𝑊𝑟𝑖𝑡𝑒𝑟 #𝑁𝑜𝐵𝑒𝑡𝑎𝑊𝑒𝐷𝑖𝑒𝐿𝑖𝑘𝑒𝑀𝑒𝑛 #𝐼𝐿𝑜𝑣𝑒𝑇𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡 #𝐴𝑢𝑟𝑡ℎ𝑜𝑟𝐼𝑠𝐴𝐵𝑟𝑜𝑘𝑒𝐶𝑜𝑙𝑙𝑒𝑔𝑒𝑆𝑡𝑢𝑑𝑒𝑛𝑡 [𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐃𝐚𝐭𝐞: 𝐉𝐚𝐧𝐮𝐚𝐫𝐲 𝟏𝟎𝐭𝐡, 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟓 ~ 𝐅𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐡 𝐃𝐚𝐭𝐞....] p.s. [ Twilight as a whole belongs to Stephanie Meyers. I only take credit for my characters and the altered storyline.]
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