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Ongoing, First published Jun 10, 2014
The Perfectors

It's 2269, and 17 year old Lottie Edwards is the daughter of Harry Edwards, the president of the Perfectors. 

The Perfectors are a group of people that are working to create the perfect society finding everyone that isn't a straight white person (known as 'Undesirables) and sending them to Ooblok (formally known as the moon) and making them work to produce food, clothing, technology, and find water. 

When Lottie and her class go on an excursion to the state's Ragnarök (the prison where Undesirables are kept until the end of each month (when they're send to Ooblok), she meets an Undesirable who makes her question everything in her life that she thought was obvious.

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