Erroneous Apparition
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Last published Thu, Jul 26, 2012
Marina Alteron is normal.
Just a normal seventeen year old girl moving to an old town up in Vermont.
No worries, no anxiety.
Until she meets Hunter.
In the small, seemingly abandoned town of Olive Moon, hides a secret. No one knows about it. The house it thrives in is hundreds of years old. It's locked in a deep blue chest stowed away in an attic. It's waiting for someone. For Marina Alteron.
When Marina and her parents move to Olive Moon, they buy a large rickety old house. Beautiful, yet creepy in a way. While she is exploring the house, she stumbles upon a chest in her attic. Curious, she opens it. And now, before her stands a boy who looks her age. He sends her a telepathic message, that his name is Hunter and he is dead. He needs her to give him energy to bring him back. Freaked out, Marina closes it up. Too late. He follows her everywhere begging her to give her some of her life force to make him alive and free again.
Will she agree?
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