Need comments on how to improve!

I am wrighting down all of my ideas for upcoming storys and I need people to tell me if I made mastakes, need to dial it down, and or conrinue with them.

This book will be full of the starting of my storys, but will only be half chapters.

I claim all of these storys, the caracters, and every and any situation they are in.

I am terible at spelling. But I am improving and working on my skills and reqirements.

I am very fond of commas.

All comments welcome, but please do not be unessasayly cruel. I am very shy about my wrightings and am only doing this becuse I have no one who is willing to read them.