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Last published Fri, Jan 25, 2019
I am wrighting down all of my ideas for upcoming storys and I need people to tell me if I made mastakes, need to dial it down, and or conrinue with them.
This book will be full of the starting of my storys, but will only be half chapters.
I claim all of these storys, the caracters, and every and any situation they are in.
I am terible at spelling. But I am improving and working on my skills and reqirements.
I am very fond of commas.
All comments welcome, but please do not be unessasayly cruel. I am very shy about my wrightings and am only doing this becuse I have no one who is willing to read them.
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