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🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊Complete
A Different Path
Hello! This will be another Jack and Crutchie book, as I want to see if I can write a better story than my other, finished one, "Unscripted." I'm sure there will be many, many, many parallels to the two stories.Complete
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The Summer Of 05 (Yandere Marble hornets x reader)
You have been one of Alex's childhood friends, and so therefore when he asked you to act in his students film project you had of course said yes to him. Especially when you already had experience in acting. Turns out this was the start of everything.
𝑴𝑨𝑹𝒀 𝑶𝑵 𝑨 𝑪𝑹𝑶𝑺𝑺 || 𝗗𝗔𝗡𝗚𝗔𝗡𝗥𝗢𝗡𝗣𝗔 𝗗𝗘𝗦𝗣𝗔𝗜𝗥 𝗧𝗜𝗠𝗘
𝐃𝐈𝐒𝐂𝐎𝐍𝐓𝐈𝐍𝐔𝐄𝐃. ❝𝙔𝙊𝙐𝙍 𝘽𝙀𝘼𝙐𝙏𝙔 𝙉𝙀𝙑𝙀𝙍 𝙀𝙑𝙀𝙍 𝙎𝘾𝘼𝙍𝙀𝘿 𝙈𝙀. ❞ 『••✎••』 ʏᴏᴜ'ᴠᴇ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ᴏɴᴄᴇ ǫᴜᴇsᴛɪᴏɴᴇᴅ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ ʏᴏᴜ'ʀᴇ ɢᴏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ɢᴇᴛ ʏᴏᴜʀsᴇʟғ ɪɴᴛᴏ, ᴀғᴛᴇʀ ᴀʟʟ ʟᴀᴅʏ яє∂α¢тє∂ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ᴀssɪɢɴᴇᴅ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛᴏ ᴘʟᴀᴄᴇᴅ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴘᴏsᴇs ᴀ ᴛʜʀᴇᴀᴛ. ᴀᴛ ʟᴇᴀsᴛ ɴᴏᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴀ ʟᴇɴɢᴛʜ ᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʟɪғᴇ ɪs ᴀᴛ ʀɪsᴋ. ʙᴜᴛ ᴛʜɪs... ᴏᴜᴛ ᴏғ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏᴛʜɪɴɢ, ᴀ ᴋɪʟʟɪɴɢ ɢᴀᴍᴇ ᴄᴀᴍᴇ ᴏғғ ᴀs ᴀ sᴜʀᴘʀɪsᴇ ᴛᴏ ʏᴏᴜ. ᴛᴏ ᴋɪʟʟ ᴏʀ ᴛᴏ ʙᴇ ᴋɪʟʟᴇᴅ? ʏᴏᴜ ᴡᴏɴᴅᴇʀᴇᴅ ᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ғᴀᴛᴇ ɪs ɢᴏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴛᴀᴋᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛᴏ. - "𝘞𝘩𝘰𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘪𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘨𝘢𝘮𝘦, 𝘪𝘵'𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘰𝘯𝘤𝘦 𝘐 𝘧𝘪𝘨𝘶𝘳𝘦 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘢𝘳𝘦. " -ˋˏ✄┈┈┈┈ Published - 15 April 2023 Status - Discontinued. Slow updates. NB reader. [Fanganronpa x nb!reader] Warning - Although shown obsessive behavior, it mostly came from one person. This isn't a yandere x reader.![𝐈𝐓'𝐒 𝐎𝐍𝐋𝐘 𝐘𝐎𝐔 © [T.H.]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/249095126-256-k829809.jpg)
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𝐓𝐨𝐦 𝐇𝐢𝐝𝐝𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐧 𝐢𝐬 𝐚 𝐠𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐭 𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐜𝐡𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐭 𝐢𝐭𝐬 𝐩𝐞𝐚𝐤 𝐨𝐟 𝐬𝐮𝐜𝐜𝐞𝐬𝐬. 𝐍𝐨𝐭 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐠𝐢𝐟𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐠𝐨𝐨𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐬 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐚𝐥𝐬𝐨 𝐡𝐞 𝐡𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐝𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐦𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐭𝐨𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝𝐬 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐮𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐲. 𝐈𝐟 𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐡𝐮𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐲, 𝐲/𝐧 𝐢𝐬 𝐚 𝐝𝐨𝐜𝐭𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐢𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐚𝐥𝐦𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐩𝐞 𝐢𝐧 𝐦𝐞𝐝𝐢𝐜𝐚𝐥 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐦. 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐝𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐜𝐭𝐨𝐫 𝐢𝐧 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐡𝐨𝐬𝐩𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥. 𝐁𝐮𝐭 𝐡𝐨𝐰 𝐝𝐢𝐝 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐬𝐞 𝐭𝐰𝐨 𝐞𝐧𝐝 𝐮𝐩 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐞𝐚𝐜𝐡 𝐨𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫???? 𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐩𝐮𝐬𝐡 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐬𝐞𝐥𝐟 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐨𝐟 𝐢𝐦𝐚𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧. . 𝐅𝐨𝐥𝐥𝐨𝐰 𝐦𝐞 𝐨𝐧 𝐈𝐧𝐭𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐚𝐦 : @𝟏𝐝𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐝𝐢𝐫𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧_._ [𝐀𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐓𝐩𝐤𝐰 𝐨𝐫 𝐓𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐨 𝐖𝐚𝐲] 𝐁𝐚𝐜𝐤𝐮𝐩: @𝟏𝐝𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐝𝐢𝐫𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧_._𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤𝐮𝐩 𝐓𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫: @𝐚𝐧𝐚𝐧𝐲𝐚_𝐬𝐭𝐲𝐥𝐞𝐬 [𝐀𝐧𝐚𝐧𝐲𝐚ᴴ 𝐒𝐭𝐲𝐥𝐞𝐬Complete
𝑺𝒑𝒊𝒓𝒕𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝑷𝒂𝒏𝒅𝒐𝒓𝒂 𝑵𝒆𝒕𝒆𝒚𝒂𝒎 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝑨𝒐𝒏𝒖𝒏𝒈
"𝑷𝒂𝒏𝒅𝒐𝒓𝒂 𝒊𝒔 𝒇𝒖𝒍𝒍 𝒐𝒇 𝒘𝒐𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒓, 𝒔𝒊𝒓."- 𝒀/𝒏 "𝑺𝒉𝒆 𝒇𝒐𝒍𝒍𝒐𝒘𝒔 𝒆𝒚𝒘𝒂 𝒏𝒐𝒕 𝒖𝒔.."- 𝑵𝒆𝒕𝒆𝒚𝒂𝒎 "𝑯𝒐𝒘 𝒊𝒔 𝒔𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒐 𝒄𝒂𝒍𝒎 𝒂𝒇𝒕𝒆𝒓 𝒃𝒆𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒊𝒏𝒔𝒖𝒍𝒕𝒆𝒅."- 𝑨𝒐𝒏𝒖𝒏𝒈 𝐈𝐧 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐚 𝐠𝐢𝐫𝐥 𝐢𝐬 𝐛𝐨𝐫𝐧 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐎𝐦𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐚𝐲𝐚 𝐜𝐥𝐚𝐧, 𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐝 𝐨𝐟 𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞𝐥𝐟 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐠𝐞. 𝐋𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠. 𝐇𝐞𝐫 𝐜𝐮𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐲 𝐭𝐨 𝐦𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐢𝐝𝐞. 𝐀 𝐡𝐚𝐥𝐟-𝐛𝐫𝐞𝐞𝐝, 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐦𝐨𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐛𝐞𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚 𝐝𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐦𝐰𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐛𝐞𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚 𝐭𝐫𝐮𝐞 𝐧𝐚'𝐯𝐢. 𝐌𝐚𝐧𝐲 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐫𝐲 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐩𝐩𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞, 𝐚𝐬 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬'𝐧𝐭 𝐬𝐞𝐞𝐦 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞 𝐧𝐚'𝐯𝐢. 𝐇𝐚𝐢𝐫 𝐚𝐬 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐭𝐞 𝐚𝐬 𝐬𝐧𝐨𝐰, 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐞𝐲𝐞𝐬 𝐭𝐰𝐨 𝐜𝐨𝐥𝐨𝐫𝐬, 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐠𝐫𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐲 𝐲𝐞𝐥𝐥𝐨𝐰. 𝐒𝐮𝐫𝐥𝐲 𝐝𝐢𝐟𝐟𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐭.. 𝖨 𝖽𝗈 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝗈𝗐𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝗒 𝗈𝖿 𝖺𝗏𝖺𝗍𝖺𝗋. 𝖣𝗈 𝖾𝗇𝗃𝗈𝗒. 𝖡𝗎𝗁-𝖻𝗒𝖾
♥︎𝐋𝐚𝐬𝐭 𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐰♥︎ - {Umeji × Reader}
𝙴𝚗𝚎𝚖𝚒𝚎𝚜 𝚝𝚘 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝚒𝚜 𝚊 𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚎 𝚊𝚜 𝚘𝚕𝚍 𝚝𝚘 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎. 𝙵𝚘𝚕𝚕𝚘𝚠 𝚄𝚖𝚎𝚓𝚒 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚈/𝚗 𝚊𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚋𝚊𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚘𝚠𝚗 𝚙𝚛𝚒𝚍𝚎 𝚊𝚜 𝚠𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝚊𝚜 𝚊 𝚙𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚊𝚕 𝚜𝚎𝚛𝚒𝚊𝚕 𝚔𝚒𝚕𝚕𝚎𝚛 𝚘𝚗 𝚌𝚊𝚖𝚙𝚞𝚜.
🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊
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