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Complete, First published Jan 27, 2019
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COMPLETED (EDIT: In the process of being rewritten! Some of the writing might have you cringing! New chapters will be uploaded once they're all edited and written!)

Meet Olivia, she's from Amity. You may think that everyone is Amity is just the happiest people in the world, right? Well, you're wrong. Not everyone at least.

When Olivia transfers to Dauntless, where her sister transferred, no one could really figure out why. But will her past from Amity follow her? Haunt her, even? What about a certain Dauntless leader that seems to like her?


"Training is over for today, everyone out!" Eric roars and as I'm about to walk through the door, I hear his cold voice yet again, "Not you Via, you stay,"

The others flood out and I stay planted near the door, he slowly stalks towards me and I find myself walking backward until I've hit the door behind me, I slightly jump from shock and let out yet another shaky sigh, he puts both of his arms beside my head, easily towering over me.

"I'm going to break you," he starts, speaking darkly as he looks directly into my eyes, "I'm not sure how, but I will, and I'm going too,"

"You can't break something that's already been broken by someone else," I whisper, barely audible but I know he hears it.

"Who could have possibly broken you? You lived in Amity, Baby doll," he snarls, and I push him out of the way with my shoulder. I walked out of there.






(As of 3/28/2019)
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Dauntless Initate ||Eric Coulter||

16 parts Complete Mature

||Set pre-Divergent. I own nothing except for Tempest (Storm) Eaton, her plotlines, and some side characters that don't belong to Veronica Roth.|| ||Set in The Transfer and The Initiate|| Storm Eaton is that one girl in Abnegation who wanted to be cared about. The one who wanted for something that her parents were supposed to give to her, but neither of them did. Her brother Tobias was the only one who did, and they both shared the pain of an abusive father, Marcus Eaton. They knew that they had to get away from him and his abusive ways, they also didn't care how they did, but one thing was for certain. Everything was about to change for both of them. ||Set 2 years before the Divergent book series began. This series is mainly based off of the book series "Divergent" by Veronica Roth, though some of the movie scenes may be included||

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