Mine Everlasting
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Last published Thu, Jul 4, 2019
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Have you ever tried to read My Immortal and just couldn't get past the bad writing? Do you want to actually understand the insane plot?
Welcome to Mine Everlasting, the longest My Immortal rewrite (as far as I can tell). Come enjoy meeting all your favorite characters from Harry Potter all over again, but this time they're goth and have none of the personality from the original canon!
I'm here for you as I rewrite all of My Immortal to be intelligible.
Inspired by My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie.
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