The Imperfect look
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  • Reads 6,147
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  • Parts 14
  • Time 1h 4m
Ongoing, First published Jan 28, 2019
My eyes closed for a split second but a second was all I needed.  My heart pounded in my ears and the only one I could see was gun. I slowly rose my vision going dark entirely

I didn't hear the light gasp my brother let out or see the way gun was looking at me as if he'd just struck the lottery , but my eyes were pools of darkness and only death was swimming inside.
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