When Thunder Rolls
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Alright! So it's that time of year again. Where if you're a student, you are forced to participate in The Young Writers Contest. I was told that I could use a story I've already written, as long as I edit it and critique it. So here I am! I've obviously chose one of my favorite writings, "When Thunder Rolls". Except, in this version, I've created an alternate ending, along with changing the names of the characters. So please, before reading, go back and re-read my first version then come and read it's alternate ending. Thank you!
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