When Thunder Rolls

When Thunder Rolls

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Alright! So it's that time of year again. Where if you're a student, you are forced to participate in The Young Writers Contest. I was told that I could use a story I've already written, as long as I edit it and critique it. So here I am! I've obviously chose one of my favorite writings, "When Thunder Rolls". Except, in this version, I've created an alternate ending, along with changing the names of the characters. So please, before reading, go back and re-read my first version then come and read it's alternate ending. Thank you!
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One sentence can change everything. Furthermore one sentence can determine your role. Friend? Or stranger? May made a mistake in her 2nd year of middle school. She accidentally told Drew something she shouldn't have. And then she lied to him, causing him to change into the man he is now. They are now in highshcool. But they are farther apart than the Sun and Earth. Their paths haven't crossed since then...and it seems like, they will never cross again. But some people just wouldn't let it end there. So what now? {completed and currently under construction for grammar mistakes/errors and need of revising and editing. Still alright to read tho ;)}

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