Cold World
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Last published Wed, Feb 27, 2019
Look at the world we live in. A cruel, sadistic world. Look at the daily suffering and all the injustice that happens. Look at how flawed we all are. Everyday people are dying and suffering because of what their fellow human beings do to them.
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