The Lost Key

The Lost Key

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It is the year 1450 BC. From the shores of the river nile, an Egyptian will embark on an adventure like never before. A group of Assyrian soliders, under the command of General Ashurdan have stolen the stature of Thoth and have placed it in Ancient Babylon. Tuteskihos, an indo-Egyptian priest of Amun-Ra, who is the son of Thoth, the living incarnation is summoned by the Pharoah to retrieve it. Tutekshios travels to Tyre to where he meets Netherbara, a tough warrior in the army. The two shall embark on a journey from Tyre to Nivenh and finally Babylon. And to the north, from a land called Greece comes a Greek Slave, who escapes, her name Saria. Over the journey they will meet friend and foe, deciding whom to trust and whom not too. But one thing is certain. The neighbouring empires, Mittani, Assyria and the Hittites are all set to find this stature, that is rumoured that it can grant powers to any King. Only time will tell if Tuteskihos and Netherbara, Saria will make it to Babylon to retrieve the sacred stature. This story contains elements of fantasy, and not everything is historically accuracte, but I'll try and keep it as accuracte as possible - It is historical fantasy!!!!! This is for a writing comp, so please be brutal, but also tell me parts which you liked. I am ESL, so my language might not be perfect.
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