Amabel's Story

I'm helping my friend write a story and this is the character that I created. This is her story, and if your interested in finding out what the original story is about just go to TeenInk.com and look for kindlegirl. This story is also posted up on her page along with the main story called Black Out. It's thanks to her that I was able to come up with Amabel, so you should really check it out.

So, I finally went through and fixed the mistakes. I also put this under short stories, because I would like to think of this as more of a separate kind of thing than the original it's supposed to go with. If you find anymore mistakes, please let me know and I'll try to fix them!