The Zoo *Rewrite*
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Ongoing13m
Last published Wed, Feb 6, 2019
A story about a girl running from her past.
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I have a draft of the original story, I didn't think it was good enough so I never published it. Tell me what you think of this story, I think the plot of this story is way better than the original.
Started- Feb. 2, 2019
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