Message to the Moon - Book 1: The Forest

Message to the Moon - Book 1: The Forest

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"My name is Lukaal, I am a Typeless elf born with the ability to store objects within a small pocket dimension that I can access wherever I am and whenever I need. A Typless elf who lived centuries ago in the mainland for my kind had the ability to see into the future. She left written transcripts and notes for the people of the future to follow. She foretold of a Typless elf who lived in a village of Typeless within the Great Forest. A village that didn't exist yet. One that only came to be because of the predictions. She wrote that this elf would have the ability to hold almost limitless items within their hands, all in a safe place only they could access. That elf would be burdened and honored with a task. A quest to deliver another one of her writings to the land of the Luna. That elf is thought to be me. I carry a letter that holds to secret to saving the world from an unknown, unseen, silent threat. I must deliver this letter to an unknown Lunic Elf. The prophecy says that when I get to my destination I would know who the letter is for." *** Set millions of years in the future where humans have evolved to either use the magic the earth gives them or into Orc-ish beasts. And, rarely... Something else. *** My first ever original book-like story. I do take constructive criticism! Especially if it's helping me with my descriptions. (I am fully aware they aren't as well written as they could be.)
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I wanted to do a bit of a rewrite again I'm sorry I'm hardly ever happy with the results and it has to be completely perfect so please bare with me . it takes alot for me to be happy with what I write . any spellings or mistakes in my writing please tell me if you see any. thanks for actually reading this X . here's the actual discription. I could have had a normal life but after getting myself in trouble that chance was completely lost I couldn't change what happened I wish I could but I blew it. the consequences are well I can never leave my room or even see the sun for the fear that she's there telling me what I've done wrong. over and over making me know there's no chance I can change my ways. however how wrong she was. I could have made it better but I didn't I only made it worse for myself

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