Usque ad mare

Usque ad mare

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This story takes place in Canada in the year 2168. The world has flooded, causing the remaining inhabitants to settle on high ground. Land is scarce and only the strong survive. Our story follows a young man named Otis as he embarks on a remarkable Odyssey from what is currently Montreal to the rocky mountains on the west coast. I would appreciate feedback on what I have so far
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After the earth becomes uninhabitable, humanity is forced to reside within one unfathomably large building. Within it's many floors, it is organized with the poor residing at the bottom, and as the floor number increases, so does the resident's wealth. This story is the story of a man named Athos, who one day decided that he's had enough, and escapes from his life on floor 3011 and climbs up the floors to confront the head of Dolos known as Ruby human. This is my first ever full length novel draft. I'd appreciate any criticism that can tear my story to shreds so that I may reconstruct it as a stronger and fundamentally improved story/novel.

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