Hide and Die
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Im working on a book that I would like to get published and turned into a motion picture. The story is about a group of students that bullied a girl back in their Jr. High years and they all are put into a social group during their sophomore year. It's senior year and they all decide to take a senior trip. On there trip they're all getting killed one by one during a game of hide and seek. There is no way out of the game and its disguised as a prank. (THE MORALE OF THE STORY IS "THE POSSIBLE OUTCOME OF BULLYING AND HOW SERIOUSLY IT SHOULD BE TAKEN) I'm finishing it up and I think its gonna look real good as a movie. I would some feedback about this. I have real potential for this. I also have plenty of more ideas once this gets out there. -Jay :) 6/10/14
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==WARNING== I wrote this a couple of years ago and it isn't well written. I am hoping to rewrite this but for now this will be up. Before you read this you should probably reconsider since the plot is cliche in the worst way possible, some scenes are hard to follow and lets not mention the multitude of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. SO READ AT YOUR OWN RISK DONT TELL ME I DIDNT WARN YOU Now for the $H!T Description: Let me introduce myself, my name is Rhea Lyon but in school I am known as Rhea Matthews or 'nerd girl'. My father owns the largest chain of high class schools, hotels and restaurants and my mother owns the most successful range of fashion. Everyone expects their daughter to be a beautiful supermodel, but what can I say? I care more about science and maths than I do for fashion. I am someone most people would call a nerd. I stay invisible to everyone except my best friend Jessica Fawk; no one in the school even knows that I am the sister of the school football team's captain. Then one day when I come home I discover something I never thought I would encounter. I decide that the bullying has to stop. Jessica and I change completely, from the nerds to the most popular girls in school. We learn to defend ourselves, how to be confident and we never let anyone step on us anymore. And on top of all of that....well, there are guys.
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