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Last published Mon, Dec 16, 2019
hi guys ItsAteMax here and this story is suppose to be our project. that project is to make a short film and as the leader of our group, director, and scriptwriter......i made this........crap. BUT ENOUGH OF THAT!!! ENJOY THIS STORY EVEN THOUGH I'M VERY BAD AT WRITING .-. AND I WOULD LIKE TO APOLOGIZE FOR THE TYPOS AND GRAMMATICAL ERRORS \(-3-)/
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My name is Dan and this is my story. I came from a wealthy family. My mother owns a large company while my older brother is one of the smartest student in our school. While people know me as a very friendly guy. Because of this, people labeled our family as "Perfect". But our family holds a bigger secret. Our mother doesn't pay much attention to us because of work. Me and my older brother has different fathers. The two of us....... let's just say the we don't get along that much.
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