Mass Effect (Random Story Short)

Just a Random Story that I made I have no idea if it good just had to do an assignment about detail. plus it so happened I was playing Mass Effect at the time so yeah :)

Oh and this is my very first fanfic write so criticism is all welcome.

I don't own Mass Effect it goes to Bioware respectfully

oh and I don't own the photo as well could find the photo owner so I tried to give credit :(