Warzone

This is my first story that I am releasing online and to the world so please do leave comments telling me things that I could fix. I like the criticism but dont leave hate comments please. I am very shy about myself and all of my work that I do, I dont really show my work often. Well enough about all of that lets get to what this story is all about. This story is about two people who are both in training to become soldiers to fight the war, when they suddenly need more soldiers to go fight they both agree to do it and watch each others backs. They get stationed together and there feeling grow for each other. Also please dont steal my story I have been working on this for multiple years now.