Your Promise
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"ngapain lo bawa gw kesini?" tanya Raya heran dgn makhluk hidup yg ada didepannya ini
"ya seperti yg gw omongin ke lo 'tentang hukuman buat lo karena udah malu*in anak paling cool di sekolahan SMA Bina Mulya "ujar Farell dgn PeDe-nya.
" Ada ember gx bang? Tanya Raya
"Ada noh! Ember Sampah ..!! Bhahahh "tawa Farell membuahana
" Dih,, lo bilang lo cool? (Farell mengangguk*setuju sebelum Raya melanjutkan ucapannya) klo COOLKAS gw percaya! "tawa Raya pecah
" udah* ah capek gw ngladenin lo mulu. Jadi hukuman buat lo itu,,.. Lo harus jdi BUDAK gw selama 1 bulan! "tegas Farell
Raya yg sedari tadi tak henti menahan tawa sekarang tercengang tidak percaya mendengar ucapan dr Farell...😲
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Kalo kamu mau tahu bagaimana kelanjutannya'Baca lah dan ikutilah setiap Chepter nya 😊
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