Ocean eyes (EDITING)

Ocean eyes (EDITING)

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Mkay guys, I'm putting this story under construction because let's face it : it was shit and written very haphazardly because I had no time to actually think about the plots and the twists and all that shindig in the middle. I just wanted to update as swiftly as possible without considering what i was in fact putting up. So with that being said, i am taking more things under consideration. the chapters will be longer and more meticulous since this is supposed to be a longer story and I didn't elaborate well. Now that i've got time on my hands with winter break and such, i'll do my best to edit and write more. I hope you'll like the new version of this story for it will be changed quite a bit. okay, bye now. * Iris McCain just moved to New York City because of her father's job. She is pissed and hell-bent and a ball of raging fire. She has dropped her anchor at home and she's not retrieving it back. Revenge is the only thing invading her mind. But what she didn't expect was issues and people. With all the teen drama and boy problems, she starts doubting herself. Does she really want to get the hell out of New York? She finds herself fighting many battles, most of which are self-struggle and issues she has spent years fixing and covering up. Soon she'll discover that the big city has created a great abyss for her to fall in, and she's edging close.
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