Girl on the water
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Eighteen year old Rosalyn Farrow is a strange girl in the world. Her mother is a lunatic. Her "brothers" are gohsts living in the house. She lives outside the walls. Her father went missing twelve years ago. And she is a sociopath. What could go wrong when the corps find her sleeping in a boat on A lake, slowly drifting to the waterfall pouring down from above. Will she find love with the short stoic corporal, or will it all burn in hell.
Sorry this is shitty, it's my first book and I had no idea what to write, most images are mine some may not be though, collages are made by me, please ask before using them. I hope you enjoy this story, please leave constructive criticism.
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