Character Reviews!! {discontinued}
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This was inspired by bloodshot2's creepypasta character reviews.
Send in your characters of any kind and I'll review all aspects of their character sheet. Including; design, personality, likes, dislikes, backstory, etc. along with how well they fit into the canon universe they belong to, if any. At the end I will rate the character from 1-10,
1- try again
2- needs a whole lot of revamping
3- need a lot of work
4- needs some work
5- you're getting there
6- that's pretty good
7- wow thats really good
8- wow that's great
9- wholly crap thats original
10- why are you even here your character is amazing
(it will very rarely be a 9 or a 10 sry)
I will try to be as nice as possible, but sometimes hearing what needs to be heard can lead to you or your character getting a lot more attention.
ALSO PROVIDE A DRAWING OR PICTURE IF POSSIBLE, I CAN CRITIQUE THAT TOO!'n
I'll be nice tho.
Thanks!!!
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