Character Reviews!! {discontinued}
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Ongoing19m
Last published Thu, Mar 14, 2019
This was inspired by bloodshot2's creepypasta character reviews.
Send in your characters of any kind and I'll review all aspects of their character sheet. Including; design, personality, likes, dislikes, backstory, etc. along with how well they fit into the canon universe they belong to, if any. At the end I will rate the character from 1-10,
1- try again
2- needs a whole lot of revamping
3- need a lot of work
4- needs some work
5- you're getting there
6- that's pretty good
7- wow thats really good
8- wow that's great
9- wholly crap thats original
10- why are you even here your character is amazing
(it will very rarely be a 9 or a 10 sry)
I will try to be as nice as possible, but sometimes hearing what needs to be heard can lead to you or your character getting a lot more attention.
ALSO PROVIDE A DRAWING OR PICTURE IF POSSIBLE, I CAN CRITIQUE THAT TOO!'n
I'll be nice tho.
Thanks!!!
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