Betrayed
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  • Parts 13
  • Time 1h 58m
  • Reads 318
  • Votes 33
  • Parts 13
  • Time 1h 58m
Complete, First published Feb 18, 2019
Mature
Who knew that a summer party could go so wrong? When loyalty and betrayal inch their way into this group of friends, someone is bound to die.  But can this murderous friend be stopped, or will the other nine guests meet their graves?

~He glanced up at me. "Do you still believe that I am not the killer?" he asked, sadness and loneliness in his voice.
"Yes," I told him, "and even if you were, I still won't abandon you. You're my friend, and I would do anything to help you." ~
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