Is This Book Good .. or nah?
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  • LECTURAS 422
  • Votos 14
  • Partes 4
  • Hora 16m
Continúa, Has publicado jun 17, 2014
Okay, so basically I'm just going to review your book and write a chapter critiquing you. If i like it, i'll say i like it. If i don't, then don't get offended. I'm just being honest with you. Honestly, i have different taste in books and most people and not everyone will agree with what i have to say soooo, yeah. If you don't like what i say, you can just easily remove yourself .... :).
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this is my first time writing a book. English is not my first language, so sorry for the grammar or misspellings. ---> At one point, Lizz reached around Sophie to grab a spoon, brushing against her hip, and froze. So did Sophie. Lizz straightened slowly, just a breath between them now. Sophie didn't move. Their eyes met. The air changed, sharp, electric. Sophie's hand was still resting on the edge of the counter, knuckles brushing Lizz's. Lizz's breath hitched, gaze flicking from Sophie's eyes to her mouth and back again like she couldn't help it. Neither of them spoke. They didn't need to. Sophie stepped back half an inch, not away, just enough to look up at Lizz more clearly. "Are we...?" Lizz's voice was hoarse. "I don't know. Are we?" Sophie's lips parted like she was going to say something, but instead, she reached up, brushing a stray curl from Lizz's face with deliberate slowness. Her fingertips lingered against her cheek, soft, burning. Lizz swore under her breath and surged forward, but stopped just short. Their mouths hovered close, breaths mingling, the space between them alive with tension so thick it hurt. "I keep thinking about the lake," Sophie murmured, voice low and wrecked. "How you looked at me. How you kissed me like..." Lizz didn't let her finish. Her hands slid to Sophie's waist, gripping tight, grounding. "Say it." Sophie's breath caught. "Like you needed me." Lizz leaned in, mouth brushing her jaw. "I did." "I still do, darling." Sophie shuddered, eyes fluttering shut, her own hands moving to Lizz's shoulders, pulling her in, but still not quite closing the distance. It was a slow burn, the kind that made the room feel ten degrees hotter. Caught in that breathless middle ground where every brush of skin felt too intimate, too loaded. Lizz's thumb stroked slow circles against Sophie's hip. Sophie's nails curled gently against the back of her neck.
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Not all people may know of what you are, but when you can be yourself, only then, do you become free. When your life is on the line, how do you respond? I have never posted on Wattpad before so please feel free to judge me. I have no idea how often I will be able to publish chapters but I will try my best. Thank you. PLEASE. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD. Please tell me if I have a grammar mistake. I often reread my chapters to make sure that I don't. And when I see one, I always go back and correct it. I will also be using the names of my friends in this, but not all people in the book have names of people I know. So if one of these names happen to be your name, I'm not a stalker, I promise.