Ash the demon

Introduction
This is a story that takes place in a world where the races live side by side. In this world magic can only be used by the nobles of the races and the occasional person with what is known as the sense. Among the race known as demons. A young demon named Ash who is the great grandson of the demon king URO.
The demons were one of the most powerful of the 15 races.
Ash was a young demon who lived at the edge of the demon territory, he had one older sibling who became a demon lord. The demon lords were the most powerful of the demons they were second only to the demon king.
Ash was a powerful demon, but he could not control all his power thus his grandfather the old demon king sealed it within him only able to awaken when he learns to control all the elements of magic, he was already good at shadow, light and fire magic. Not all demons could even use magic only the few that were of noble blood were able to use magic. The mansion Ash lived in was at one time his fathers the demon lord of the south who was killed many years ago during the great war. Now at the age of 18 Ash wanted to explore the lands outside the demon territory. Who knows what he might discover?

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