A Potion and A Wish
Whirlingstorm
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Whirlingstorm
Ongoing, First published Jun 17, 2014
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Jade just wanted to be seen by her crush, Raver. 

"... my heartbeat starts speeding up quickly making me feel quite dizzy."

She begs Nate, her genius best friend, to make a beauty potion so that Raver will finally notice her. 

"... I freeze... I feel like I am going to die of embarrassment."

But something goes wrong when she takes the potion.

"... I wish the opposite of all of what I have always wished for."

She may end up being even more invisible than before.

"... I wish that he will not see me, that I will be invisible to his eyes."


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This story has won THREE AWARDS- BEST TEEN FICTION, BEST PLOT, and BEST DIALOGUES in the contest For Romance stories by itsoriginalr -Aug. 15, 2014 <3 and also just won AUGUST 2014 Discover the undiscovered contest by tvdrevenge
(Minor editing is ongoing, please excuse my grammatical errors lol unless you're an editor. Thanks! It gets better when you read further XD Love you guys <3)
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