Don't Freak Out

Don't Freak Out

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A kids life is turned upside-down when she sees something bad. And only realizes what has happened when its far, far too late! She doesn't even know what's happening or why its happening to her! Whats happening? Why is it happening to her? Why is she the only one who can see these life-changing things? Or at least thats what she thinks... One word of advise... If you come across something you shouldn't of think to yourself ...DON'T FREAK OUT! This is what the girl says to herself over and over. But is it any use?... This is my first proper story so please leave a comment of what I could improve. Thank you for reading. Hope you enjoy ! ( It's quite short so if you have any ideas on how to make it longer, please put them in the comment section below. Thank you) Also I know its taking a long time for me to write the final chapter but I don't know how to start and end. But if you guys can help I would be really grateful. And whoever gives the best outline of the next chapter, I will use your name in the story.
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