Promised Revenge
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Last published Mon, Sep 10, 2012
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8 year old Clover Wills saw her parents die. They were shot by a street thug who then disappeared into thin air. When at their graveside, Clover makes a promise.. although she doesn't realise how hard her promise is to keep. 17 years later and an opportunity arises... but will she find the cold - blooded killer or will he kill her first?
** There will be disturbing and dark thoughts in this story... It's not me as a person - it's just how the story goes!**
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