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Taehyung is everything but a conventional alpha, he was kind, adorable and insanely handsome. His mother died while giving him birth. Taehyung's father died while saving younger son of head alpha from a rogue attack. He get to know who his mate is at his 18th birthday , but he never told anyone because he knew his mate will never accept him. jeon jungkook , younger son of head alpha is a heavenly beautiful male omega with tattoos, piercings ,abs and baby like face. Every alpha wants him, yet he didn't gave attention to any of them, he wants to live his life on his own terms. His parents were worried about his rude and arrogant behaviour. will they be able to love each other for forever or will fall apart.?? +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I have a request please if you are not liking the story,, it's pace or any character,, plz ,, you just stop reading at that point... You are not bound to read or vote ,, you are free to leave ... Kindly be humble and keep others feelings in mind while commenting and messaging.... Start:- July 12, 23 End:- oct 8, 23

A Bundle of Short Stories by Head_Moderator

This will have many short stories in it. Some of them will be dark and I will put up a warning. That's really all that needs to be said. If you have any feedback please tell me. Constructive criticism is always welcome because I really only want to get better.

Almost everything jungkook knew about his husband of three years was a lie.. . . How much taehyung would hurt his husband to protect him from getting hurt .. . . . Read to know their journey from marriage to divorce to something more... .. .. I have a request please if you are not liking the story,, it's pace or any character,, plz ,, you just stop reading at that point... .. .. .. You are not bound to read or vote ,, you are free to leave ... .. .. Kindly be humble and keep others feelings in mind while commenting and messaging.... .. .. Start:- 05 Feb.24 End:-

Part ll of my short story book . . . . . I have a request please if you are not liking the story,, it's pace or any character,, plz ,, you just stop reading at that point... .. .. .. You are not bound to read or vote ,, you are free to leave ... .. .. Kindly be humble and keep others feelings in mind while commenting and messaging.... .. .. .. ..

⚠️ PSA: THIS BOOK IS INACTIVE! ⚠️ I am no longer writing for Tom since I have moved on to other things. You can find my other future works on Tumblr and AO3 ONLY. Tumblr - t-lostinworlds | AO3 - t_lostinworlds - an archive of blurbs/prompt-based/random drabbles about the one and only Tom Holland.

Th: let's break up. He said rudely. Jk: stop kidding, let's eat , I have prepared all your favourite foods. Tears welled up in his eyes, yet he tried to be strong. will taehyung be able to repent for his sin on time or he will loose him for forever.. short story sad ending..?? I have a request please if you are not liking the story,, it's pace or any character,, plz ,, you just stop reading at that point... You are not bound to read or vote ,, you are free to leave ... Kindly be humble and keep others feelings in mind while commenting and messaging.... Start:- 07 sep. 23 End:- 02 oct. 23

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jungkook got a chance to Re-turn and made different choices. this time instead of letting one misunderstanding ruin his marriage life, he will do everything to safe his husband from a miserable life and death.. blf give his son a family and a parent that his baby deserves.. . . . I have a request please if you are not liking the story,, it's pace or any character,, plz ,, you just stop reading at that point... .. .. .. You are not bound to read or vote ,, you are free to leave ... .. .. Kindly be humble and keep others feelings in mind while commenting and messaging....

{ONGOING} Requests Open! Female reader - mainly female x female, but there are a few male x female dotted here and there. ◦Written in second person (you/your) ◦Y/N = Your Name Y/L/N = Your Last Name updates are usually once a month and I can take requests! :D tags will update as I go. have fun reading :)) To find certain people use ctrl+f and type in their name

I'm rewriting the Book again... the total information about the story will be mentioned in the introduction to please check it out.... thank you.... taekook forever and ever ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Taehyung is everything but a conventional alpha, he was kind, adorable and insanely handsome. His mother died while giving him birth. Taehyung's father died while saving younger son of head alpha from a rogue attack. He get to know who his mate is at his 18th birthday , but he never told anyone because he knew his mate will never accept him. jeon jungkook , younger son of head alpha is a heavenly beautiful male omega with tattoos, piercings ,abs and baby like face. Every alpha wants him, yet he didn't gave attention to any of them, he wants to live his life on his own terms. His parents were worried about his rude and arrogant behaviour. will they be able to love each other for forever or will fall apart.?? +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I have a request please if you are not liking the story,, it's pace or any character,, plz ,, you just stop reading at that point... You are not bound to read or vote ,, you are free to leave ... Kindly be humble and keep others feelings in mind while commenting and messaging.... Start:- July 12, 23 End:- oct 8, 23

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