*Porcelain Face.  (PG-13, not actually R)

*Porcelain Face. (PG-13, not actually R)

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A Murder, a Mystery. All over town there are mysterious disappearances. And curiously realistic dolls of the missing people delivered to doorsteps.... Who is Doll? Who is the person watching Doll? What are those weird creepy life-sized dolls appearing in weird poses all over town? What is 'Menniquin.inc'? A story told in disconnected snippets. A mystery pieced together by the reader. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ *I'd really like feedback on this, AnonSeven, L, and anybody who cares to read this, like or dislike this. >u< This is still in editing stage, please bear with me and let me know any feedback, any feedback at all, good or bad, it's helpful. Please be honest, let me know your reactions to parts, if any chilled you, if any seemed choppy, anything about it. There are some parts that are really short- I can't make them longer, but let me know if there is a way to make it work better, like condensing them into longer parts that skip between or something. NOT ACTUALLY [R]. ...I'm...not sure how to change the rating. After asking some friends, it's completely PG-13/G, actually. The rating was only for implied violence in the first place.
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