On The Edge

'Far below me, the waves grow more violent, crashing into the rocks, spraying froth everywhere. It reminds me of a vicious dog sent into frenzy by the sight of its prey. It's like the waves can tell how close I am to the edge. Just one little push and it'd all be over. Just one tiny push...'

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hi this is a short story i wrote for my english class i few months back. i found it and thought i'd just throw it out there. constructive criticism welcomed but pls be gentle :')