The Broken Girl
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I could hear them searching my room.
"Where is she? You said, she would be here. We made a deal. I gave you weed and cocaine. You gave me your daughter to pay me off." The man said angrily.
"She'll be here soon and she'll be all yours to sell. Anything you want her for. "Dad said. My watered eyes. How could he?
Jaylee Hernandez has been through it all, pain and happiness. She has experienced pain more often than happiness, especially from those who were supposed to lover her the most. She knows that she has been broken down enough to not want love. However, Jaylee knows that deserves love and happiness. After all, she has paid for it in blood, sweat, and tears.
How much does Jaylee have to pay to have it all?
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