Missing in Nowhere (Story Draft - Criticism Wanted)
- Reads 3
- Votes 0
- Parts 1
This story is a drafted story for a comic. Plz let me know if you find anything that doesn't make sense, continuity mistakes, or if you generally have any advise for changes in the story to either make the story more enjoyable or characters more likable.
All Rights Reserved
#150
afterlife
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
Nalu Oneshots
A nalu book, full of oneshots! Full of typos from my angsty pre-teen mind. Enter at own risk :) Btw just letting y'all know, I wrote this shit back when I was like, 12... Update: I'M GOING BACK TO REWRITE THEM AFTER LIKE 3 YEARS! Maybe I'll finish my 5 drafts. ;)Complete
Legends Life - Out of control
This is a novel about a topic we technically made up randomly and if there are any mistakes, errors, or just places I could fix and add more details please tell me, I want to make this book enjoyable and exciting to read! Also please be aware that some of these will be notice's and this book does need and have a blood warning and a swear warning! Please do be aware if you can't deal with blood this book does get descriptive (Partly true) and I will be explaining what scars, burns and wounds look like and the pain felt for them. This book is more themed in the future than it is nowadays. You may also find some technology that is more futuristic, and there are things talking about the past. Most of the book is switching between views of the main characters. We want you to expect the unexpected in this book, for example: Most books don't kill off the main character, we want you to think we will kill off one of them. Most of the characters in this will have birthdays and age in the background and it may not be written. There will be more books coming out so we will end this one on a cliffhanger.Complete
~Love Against Enmity~
🐻🐼-PP Omegaverse Fanfiction forbidden love 🔞+ contents Angst ---------------- This is a fanfiction and did not have to do anything with the real life, lots of 🔞+ contents so feel free to skip it if you don't like it,my English grammar is not that good and also if it had a misspellings im sorry about it...♥️
Put a Stake in it!
New Slayer! New Generation! This story is inspired by Buffy the Vampire Slayer. I do not own Buffy. All rights go to the creator and writers. But I do own this so do not steal. It won't be updated often. This will be rewritten and fixed. This is simply a rough draft of what I'm working on. So bare with me, please. I will put a real description in later. This is my first story I've written so it won't be perfect. I will accept criticism any and all criticism. Enjoy!
Anidita- Growing stronger than ever.
This is my first time writing a fanfiction. Please ignore my mistakes and Support me. It will help me a lot. 😊😊 About the story, I will write in the first chapter. Hope you all like it.Complete
Demon's Monster: Return of the Demonic Scourage
This is a draft/WIP for the actual book. Please feel free to leave feedback and or suggestions. This draft is from Feb 9 2024 P.S. I know the pacing sucks please bear with me.Complete
Hellfire Jones and the Angel Invasion
Humanity is right in the middle of an epic battle between heaven and hell. Standing on the sidelines are the laziest man on earth and the President of the United States who just might be the savior, the antichrist or both. Personally, I think we're doomed. ------------------------------------------------------- This is my first attempt at the Open Novella Contest where you choose a prompt and write a novella. The prompt I chose: "Heaven and Hell collide once again. The War Demons march to meet the Battle Angels in a struggle for dominance over the Human Realm." I almost chose the prompt which involved taking a cow for a walk, but come on. Battle Angels! Heck yeah. Moo!Complete
Secret Mafia Queen /BTS FF
This is my first fanfict story so i hope you all enjoy reading my story and i'm sorry if there's something's wrong in my grammar it's just this is my first time.Enjoy reading😊😊😊 Saranghae💜💜💜Complete
A nalu book, full of oneshots! Full of typos from my angsty pre-teen mind. Enter at own risk :) Btw just letting y'all know, I wrote this shit back when I was like, 12... Update: I'M GOING BACK TO REWRITE THEM AFTER LIKE 3 YEARS! Maybe I'll finish my 5 drafts. ;)
More detailsContent Guidelines