HEY EVERYONE!
Don't know who reads this, but I just wanted to let the people reading this know that I put up the new version of this story under the title "White Rose" and it would be great if you could check it out. I honestly think it's much better than this non-edited version, but warning it's quite different.
Here's the link!
http://www.wattpad.com/story/19625794-white-rose
Zahra Bessette is an orphan.
Ever since she could remember, she had been in the jail-like orphanage with her friends. But that all changed. When fourteen-year-old Zahra escapes from the orphanage, she finds herself in a place she never knew existed.
Qaelith.
Suddenly, Zahra goes from orphan, to a heir to a throne in Qaelith, all since she was the only child left from the royal family, which had been assassinated.
But theres a problem, that's commonly known as Drake Lessic.
Drake Lessic was the replacement king to Qaelith, but now, since Zahra arrived, he's been demoted from the throne. But he's hardly going to give up. With the help of his father, and a family friend, Drake has something wicked in store for Zahra.
Will love prevail, and save both Zahra and Drake from their worst nightmares, or will the worst happen?
Millie Ripley has only ever known one player next door. Luke Dawson. But with only a couple months left before he graduates and a blackmailer on the loose, will their love story stand the test of time? And will they both need to grow up to face the truth?