How Not To Write Stories

Me going on multiple rants about things other people write that:
Piss me off, happen way too often, or are just bad writing.
Not meant to offend you in any way.
If you have a problem with something I write, or if I misunderstood something, please leave a comment and I will try to get back to you on it and change it.
This is my first work!
(Please don't hate me I try my best)